Post by ADIL ARSHAD. on Jun 3, 2014 11:51:23 GMT
THE UNCERTAIN (2014 )
By Adil Arshad
Fade in
A young girl no more than 16 walks into her room, she is in her pyjamas and is about to get into bed, as she lifts her covers her computer opposite her bed beeps with a new message.
An envelope appears on the screen and inside the envelope there is a note that says “message from unknown123.”
(there is a storm outside which helps create an eerie atmosphere )
* Close up on the computer *
- Hello
- -um hi?
- - how are you?
- Who are you?
- Someone, you know me
- Who??
- You will see me tonight
- Um, go away you creep
- Okay then
- Prove it. You don’t know me
- Oh really? Casey.
Frightened Casey shuts down her computer and stands up. There is a symbol that bangs.
Casey walks in a circle round her room as she leaves the room to go sleep with her younger sister. The storm is still raging.
Casey gets into her sisters bed and tries to close her eyes and fall asleep.
She soon realizes that then window is open a small banging sound comes from the window. Casey stands up and slowly walks towards the window, this creates a lot of tension for the audience.
She pauses at the window for a second but jumps at the same banging sound. She opens the curtain and there is a massive whoosh. The screen goes blurry. The scene fades in again and Casey realizes the banging sound was a branch. She walks towards the bed, not frightened anymore.
When she goes back into the bed she quickly stands up and says ‘ewe’ the bed is damp with some sort of substance. Confused Casey looks up at the glass of water on the bedside cabinet. The glass is full. She looks down and realizes it is her sister’s blood. Her sister is lying there covered in blood.
Fast tense music plays as Casey runs into the wardrobe. The storm gets louder and there is a loud bang. The music is still playing. Casey begins to carve her name into the floor
‘ sos,casey 2001’
The wardrobe opens and there is a loud scream.
There is a shot of Casey awoken by a jump, in a different bedroom. She sits up in her bed heavily breathing, the breathing soon stops as Casey begins to look relieved. It was just a dream.
By Adil Arshad
Fade in
A young girl no more than 16 walks into her room, she is in her pyjamas and is about to get into bed, as she lifts her covers her computer opposite her bed beeps with a new message.
An envelope appears on the screen and inside the envelope there is a note that says “message from unknown123.”
(there is a storm outside which helps create an eerie atmosphere )
* Close up on the computer *
- Hello
- -um hi?
- - how are you?
- Who are you?
- Someone, you know me
- Who??
- You will see me tonight
- Um, go away you creep
- Okay then
- Prove it. You don’t know me
- Oh really? Casey.
Frightened Casey shuts down her computer and stands up. There is a symbol that bangs.
Casey walks in a circle round her room as she leaves the room to go sleep with her younger sister. The storm is still raging.
Casey gets into her sisters bed and tries to close her eyes and fall asleep.
She soon realizes that then window is open a small banging sound comes from the window. Casey stands up and slowly walks towards the window, this creates a lot of tension for the audience.
She pauses at the window for a second but jumps at the same banging sound. She opens the curtain and there is a massive whoosh. The screen goes blurry. The scene fades in again and Casey realizes the banging sound was a branch. She walks towards the bed, not frightened anymore.
When she goes back into the bed she quickly stands up and says ‘ewe’ the bed is damp with some sort of substance. Confused Casey looks up at the glass of water on the bedside cabinet. The glass is full. She looks down and realizes it is her sister’s blood. Her sister is lying there covered in blood.
Fast tense music plays as Casey runs into the wardrobe. The storm gets louder and there is a loud bang. The music is still playing. Casey begins to carve her name into the floor
‘ sos,casey 2001’
The wardrobe opens and there is a loud scream.
There is a shot of Casey awoken by a jump, in a different bedroom. She sits up in her bed heavily breathing, the breathing soon stops as Casey begins to look relieved. It was just a dream.