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Post by confuddled on Mar 30, 2009 16:51:48 GMT
what do you mean by the message of the book is it just like "the book highlight the eras of black American history because Taylor wants to show us how..." wb
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Post by hollis on Mar 30, 2009 17:49:27 GMT
Sounding good for an opening sentence.
Yes... why do you think Taylor wants us to remember ALL 3 ERAS? Is it so we don't forget the attitudes of the past? So we can see the struggle for equality and how hard it is?
Hmm???
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Post by cult-na-zan on Mar 30, 2009 19:49:34 GMT
maybe so that we can use it and hope to imrpove in the future.
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Post by cult-na-zan on Mar 30, 2009 21:08:42 GMT
i cant remember what part of the essay i was suppossed to put my mini essay about MLK and M.X in so ill slip it in the redraught. is that okay?
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Jamie
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Post by Jamie on Mar 30, 2009 21:14:28 GMT
How Would You Introduce The 3rd Sentence Of The Conclusion?
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Post by cult-na-zan on Mar 30, 2009 21:15:55 GMT
its okay i found it in the plan.
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Post by hollis on Mar 31, 2009 6:55:33 GMT
How Would You Introduce The 3rd Sentence Of The Conclusion? Taylor's message is... ?
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Post by hollis on Mar 31, 2009 6:55:56 GMT
its okay i found it in the plan. Yes, I do want to see this in the first draft.
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Post by hollis on Apr 2, 2009 20:50:41 GMT
A reminder folks for what (seem to generally be CREDIT essays *with redrafting*) if you have any questions about any of the symbols please ask them here before redrafting.
I can't wait to stat reading redrafts and giving credit grades to many of you!
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Post by beckiedoust on Apr 16, 2009 12:02:50 GMT
I'm just re-drafting me essay right now, and was wondering how I would lay out the little section of the book, the big that has chronological order - date of issuance - race of student etc... at first I though lets type it up then draw lines across it, but then realised that just 'ain't going to work Helppp please haha.. Also hope you are all having a good holiday, not too much partying now guys haha..
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Post by beckiedoust on Apr 16, 2009 13:59:15 GMT
Me again, can anyone give me a quote for Cassie's trip to Stawberry? Just got to that point and noticed i'd missed it out, silly me haha!
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Post by hollis on Apr 16, 2009 14:57:05 GMT
Beckie - For the first one, you need the titles of each column, then you only need the first row entry 'new', and the last one.
For your second one, I can't give you the exact quote (don't have book to hand), I'm sure someone on here can do it, but it's where Lilian Jean says something like - 'You can't look where you're going, you should walk in the road.'
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Post by beckiedoust on Apr 19, 2009 12:00:48 GMT
Thanks
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Post by cult-na-zan on Apr 23, 2009 9:39:40 GMT
it was ' if you cant watch where you're going, get in the road. Maybe that way you wont be bumping into decent white folks with your little nasty self' but you dont need it now lol.
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